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the thing that works
by cruel intentions
was another bruise
I didn't mention

the hollow behind
these eyes
is where I
feel each of your lies

the vessel of your daring
was not a cross worth bearing

I remember each
of your words and wiles
but too much longer
and I wont know how to smile
©2007-2009 ~Sorrows-Song
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I don't usually do rhymes, so be nice to this one. :)
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I like it. Good job. I personally prefer rhyming poems better myself, but this is a great free verse poem.
It is a rhyming poem... just not every line.

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“We are all broken and wounded in this world. Some choose to grow strong at the broken places.”
- Harold J. Duarte-Bernhardt
Yes, I caught that.

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